The Listeners…


Hannah (Photo credit: Steve Wyper)

”Love has been misused several times, it’s kind of meaningless.” Hannah said, a wistful look in her blue eyes, she looked so sad and I wanted to hug her. But I know there are times you just listen and not say a word. Just been there was all Hannah needed at that time and I listened with rapt attention.

My heart broke into a million fragments by her tale, I felt the alien feeling of fear gripped my soul, how could she have kept quiet for so long, how did she manage to keep her sanity?

”I love him,” she was saying and a lump rose up in my throat, I wanted to cry and then like a rainbow on a grey sky she dropped the bombshell!

Who is Hannah? What is her story? Why does she hate the word love?

Stay tuned dear friends, I’ll be back… or better still, can anyone tell me the story of Hannah? Can you dig deep and find the right words?

I’ll be waiting dear friends!

Much love, always:)

16 comments on “The Listeners…

  1. RoSy says:

    I will listen to hear what she says next…

  2. Love Can Be A Spiteful And Hateful Word To Some. To Those Whom It Has Been Misused With Too Many Times. The Fact She Still Loves Whomever Isn’t Surprising. To Some, There Was Only Ever That One Love. And That Love Hurt Them. They Carry The Hurt. But, They’ve Never Forgotten The Love. To Those People, They Have To Cling To The Love To Give It All Some Meaning. They May Hate The Word, They May Hate How They Feel Now, But They Remember How They Felt When The Love Was Wonderful/Amazing/Whatever.
    I Wanna Know The Rest Of The Story, Miss.
    I’ll Be Waiting To Read More.

    • Seyi sandra says:

      Your poem is enough story, how descriptive! Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts. I’ll post the second part of the story tomorrow. I appreciate your input and do stop by again!!
      Much love:)

  3. Ben Naga says:

    The right story will tell itself employing you as its scribe.

  4. fiammisday says:

    So nice here!!!! I’m following you now!!!! Abig kiss from Florence!!!!

  5. JK Bevill - Lost Creek Publishing says:

    Beautiful Photo!

  6. razvan chivulescu says:


  7. Incredible hook, and phenomenal photo! 🙂

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